2 comments on “Heavy Flow

  1. A good story, a good rhythm, and a good characterization. Maybe just… with a too subtle or too light ending? I mean I actually don’t have the least idea why the black woman who melted herself down the drain could become any kind of danger for everyone…

  2. Hi Marco,

    I guess I was trying to imply that what we see the woman do is only one of the things that she is capable of. Maybe that’s not entirely clear. I’m sure the story could stand another re-write at some point but I don’t know if that’ll ever happen.

    Anyway, thanks for comment. Happy reading!

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